Talk:Syren/Transcript/@comment-35306648-20180506134555

Kwami4ever, I noticed some punctuation and minor mistakes. I can offer advice, if you want. I'm not going to edit the page out of respect, though.

For example, the first line should go "Nadja Chamack, live among Paris. Escaped animals are invading the city! But Ladybug, Cat Noir and their new friend, Rena Rouge, are already on the spot." as opposed to "Nadja Chamack live among Paris as escaped animals are invading but Ladybug, Cat Noir and their new friend Rena Rouge are already on the spot." The sentence here is run-on and makes it unpleasant to read, not to mention that you missed some small words. I'm pretty sure a transcript should be identical to what they speak, so I advise that you re-listen to the line after you write it down. (I know I've only contributed like, once to writing a transcript, but I like to think I kinda got the hang of it)

I'm offering my help because I'm currently creating my own subtitles, which means I will have a file with every dialogue line timed, with buttons allowing me to play them back one by one. I could easily double check if you hadn't missed anything or help with the punctuation a bit.